Captain Snail
FireI never knew how truly cold I could feel till i felt warm I never knew what pain was like till I felt omnipotent formFire
To all the why's i ever asked the brightest answer burns With all these things that i dont know Do i deserve what i yearn?
A hot shower gives me power That cold mornings never formed But when i can't turn off the tap This comfort is far too warm
It envelops me, surrounds me, keeps me safe From all the things that could come It soothes me, relieves my regret For all the things I've done
But I'm too comfort
WaterI swim around, underground, where tainted water keeps me warm let her pressure crush my skull so i'll never have to be bornWater
i cough one up, she pulls me down on my knees, i kiss the ground it spins me up, throws me around this warm whirlpool i found
its safe here, no one is watching you're safe, dear, no one is dying its late, dear, why are you crying? its fate, we're not the ones lying.
AirAftermath smoke curls in the air From a fetus, I unfold, to love work and care This power overwhelms what is fair I don't breathe airAir
my motivator in the mist; her screams remind me why but her voice fades to a whisper and I'm afraid she'll die.
this feeling thats mine... i must hold on... this moment i own... gotta cling strong... she's leaving? don't go for long... i miss never being wrong
gimme my air, i wanna breathe gimme my smoke, i wanna wheeze i'll never choke, i'll never leave just let me be
To Do
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~Kaa
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Why do you like it?"
Oh wow yeah haha sorry I really don't log onto deviantart as much as I used to.
Anyways, I love your piece "When I was 16" because I am infact at the tender age of sixteen myself and can identify well with what you've written. Not to mention I love the structure and what's being said, and if you ask me I think it fell together perfectly
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I can't move
I can't move things
I want things to happen to me
I want to let go of things
I want to be free
I want you to leave me
I want you to see me
I want you to be with me
A E I O U!
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comment, to get comments.
share your kindness, not your hate.
love the art, before yourself.
meditate on this.
And I'm not lacking art, I'm lacking art that's worth posting
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